What have I done to improve my blog?

In my last post, I identified that I needed to make some improvements to my blog.
Firstly, I needed to increase the use of IT in my blog. Below are some examples of when I have done this and which blog this was done on:

• Addition of an mp4. example to increase ICT use and break up the post "Communication Through Eyes".
• Prezi added to "Nightcall-lyrics" to show which lyrics are placed into each scene.
• Inclusion of a Youtube video to my music video analysis of Taylor Swift's "I Knew You Were Trouble".
• Bubbl.us added to my blog "choosing a project" to show the different options of projects
• Slideshare on my blog FOSMV: Mise en Scene/costume/hair/make-up
• Youtube video example on my post about editing in Snythpop music videos.

I have also added more example and images to blogs to better analyze different Synthpop music videos. Additionally, I have clarified my blog about the tone of Synthpop music videos with more descriptive adjectives than just "dark" to describe the tone. I have also added more information (such as the post on audience and editing techniques) and examples to some posts about the features of Synthpop music videos as well as other details (on posts about performance space).

What is lacking from my blog?

After completing my research, I have peer and self evaluating and reviewed my blog. Some improvements were noticed that can be made to improve my blog. I received 14/20 marks with me being held back on receiving more marks based on the reasons below:

• A need to include more images/examples with attached analysis in my research of Synthpop music videos. 
• A need to include a wider range of media and IT devices in my project to break up more lengthy posts.   
• A clarified sense of the tone of Synthpop music videos.
• A clarification of why I am using long takes in my music video and examples of this in Synthpop music videos.