What is lacking from my blog?

After completing my research, I have peer and self evaluating and reviewed my blog. Some improvements were noticed that can be made to improve my blog. I received 14/20 marks with me being held back on receiving more marks based on the reasons below:

• A need to include more images/examples with attached analysis in my research of Synthpop music videos. 
• A need to include a wider range of media and IT devices in my project to break up more lengthy posts.   
• A clarified sense of the tone of Synthpop music videos.
• A clarification of why I am using long takes in my music video and examples of this in Synthpop music videos.